Showing posts with label Italy. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Italy. Show all posts

Friday, July 10, 2015

INSIDE THE MIND OF A NOVELIST 

A Casting Couch Book Interview by Sheila Claydon:

 A Most Ineligible Suitor by Sarah Richmond 


What prompted the idea for this book? While on a visit to Lucca, Italy, we visited Puccini’s home. I wanted to write about a heroine who lived in the same era. Puccini wrote in the ‘verisimo’ or realism style. His plays show brutality and violence, poverty and want. My heroine has been sheltered. She knows nothing of the world outside her small circle of wealth and privilege. Her trip to Italy is an eye-opener for her. Another inspiration came from a painting by John Singer Sargent called ‘Group with Parasols’. The light he used reminded me of Italy. The ladies in the scene are dressed in white linen and are enjoying an outdoor picnic, something my heroine would love to do.

Did you work through the plot first and then cast the characters, or was it characters first?  I decide on the story I want to tell and then pick the characters who best help show the elements of the story.

In A Most Ineligible Suitor, the heroine is on holiday with a distant cousin. She is very much a free spirit who has escaped to a country with fewer social restrictions and a decorum different from English society. She is having the time of her life.
The hero is an Englishman. He is in disguise and his purpose for being in Italy—to catch an international jewel thief--is complicated by her antics. He is not comfortable being dishonest with her, and yet he has a duty to his profession to pretend to be someone he isn’t.

What she teaches him about life and love is the theme of the story.

Which characters were the hardest for you to develop and why?  The male POV is more difficult for me. The challenge is to make the hero strong without being brutal, decisive without being unkind. The reader must understand his motivation, even sympathize with his flaws, but he can never be pitiful or weak.

How did you decide how your characters should look? There are many wonderful websites that show pictures of the ladies in the late Victorian era. I especially took note of the couture dresses and bridal dresses of the times, which are a delight. www.Victoriana.com is one of my favorite websites to visit.

How did you develop your characters’ traits? I rely on Heroes and Heroine by Tami D. Cowden, Caro LaFever, and Sue Viders. When I have a heroine in mind, I look through H and H and find the worst possible traits in a hero for her to fall in love with which leads to all kinds of delicious conflict.
I also use people I have met on my travels. Some characters are a combination of traits of the people I have known.
Marjorie is a misfit in some ways and doesn’t realize why until she comes to Italy. Edward, having been raised in a strict household with no mother, doesn’t know how to express love. He may not even know, in the beginning, what love is.

All characters have goals. Can you sum your characters’ goals in a word or two, or are they multi-layered? There are the short term external goals: he is trying to catch a thief, she is on vacation and wants to see the sites. There are the long term internal goals: To love and find love.

Do you like the characters in your book? Are they people you would want to spend time with and if so, which one is your favorite, and which one would you most like to meet and why?  Marjorie introduces herself this way: “My name is Marjorie Mayweather and people tell me I have a sunny disposition. Who wouldn’t with a name such as Mayweather?”
I like a heroine who can be at ease with people, probably because I have always been rather shy. She’s smart. She knows in her circle she must act totally defenseless so that the suitor will feel manly. This does not bother her until she meets the hero. He understands her better than she understands herself.
Meeting the right man makes all the difference!
As for who I’d like to meet, the villain of the story is my favorite character of all. The villain is so much fun to read about, trying to figure out a motivation, or what possible reason there must be for such bad behavior. I could have such a good conversation with my villain, I think.

Thank you for this opportunity to talk about A Most Ineligible Suitor. I had so much fun writing the book.

Best wishes to all.

Sarah Richmond

Wednesday, September 5, 2012

Excerpt from A Most Ineligible Suitor


A Most Ineligible Suitor by Sarah Richmond
Montlake Romance
Excerpt

The railway station was teeming with people. She searched for the ticket agent but stopped abruptly when she saw a familiar figure pacing in front of a stone bench, his head bent, his arms clasped behind him.
Edward had arrived ahead of her. How her spirit soared to see him. At the same time she wondered why he was here.
When he saw her, his dark, brooding countenance disappeared, replaced by a generous smile. She hurried to meet him, clinging to her hat, hoping beyond hope that he was here to take her home. His hand touched her gloveless hand as he reached to take her valise. Sparks raced to her core.
“How did you know I’d be here,” she rasped. Her voice failed her as did her decorum. She flung her arms around his neck and embraced him.
“I didn’t but I’m happy to have found you,” he whispered for her and her alone to hear.
She drew back and gazed into his eyes.
They had a moment before decisions must be made, of alternatives sought out and discussed. She would never forget this moment when they found each other.
“I’m so sorry,” she said.
“For what?”
“For involving you in such a sordid matter.”
“You did nothing wrong,” he said.
“So you do believe me?”
“I regret doubting you. It is in my nature.”
Again she saw the gentle curve of his mouth, a suggestion of happiness. She sensed no fear in him. She’d been terrified, but he was reassuring her that her fears were unfounded.
The sound of a steam whistle in the distance alerted her to the arrival of the next train. The milling crowd picked up their cases and parcels and crowded together on the platform. A little man wearing a blue jacket and cap waved frantically at them to step back from the track.
“We must hurry,” Marjorie said. “Have you brought money for a ticket?”
“Tickets won’t be necessary,” he said. “The police are satisfied you are innocent.”
“But how?”
He offered her his arm and she accepted. He steered her to the empty stone bench.
“Sit down, Marjorie,” he said. “I’ve something important to tell you.”
She heard the whistle of the approaching train and saw great puffs of smoke belching upward.
“The train to Naples is almost here,” she said. “I want to be on it, to go home where I belong.”
“Hear me out,” he said. “If you wish to return to England, I will understand.”
“Yes, I believe you are the most understanding man I’ve ever met.”
Mothers called to their children, and she heard their eager cries of excitement as the train squealed to a stop and sighed. People in the train lowered their windows and waved madly to those on the platform. People were getting on the train.
Marjorie wouldn’t be one of them.
She sat down on the bench shaded by a row of tall cypress. He took a seat beside her and reached for her hand. She held on to him with complete trust. His expression was very somber.
Instantly, she became apprehensive. All was not well. He’d told her the police no longer considered her a suspect.
What else could possibly be the matter?



Tuesday, July 31, 2012

New title with Montlake Romance

Sarah Richmond is now a Montlake Romance author. Find A Most Ineligible Suitor at Amazon.com this fall.